Editing Text - Year 2 Term 2 (Unit 12)
Teacher Note-This text is taken from page 103 of the N.L.S. "Developing Early Writing" It can be word processed and printed off.
Edit the text below. You can change words, add words and put in connectives to make the sentences more interesting.
Here are some connectives you may like to use.
later first suddenly then finally next after a while first meanwhile after that

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